2020-2021学年新人教版选择性必修第三册同步课时强化训练 Unit 3 Writing—A report o

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写作指导
本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于环境问题的报道。写作时注意以下几点：
1．以事实为依据，对事实给予明确的、实事求是的报道。
2．要有明确的文章结构。
3．语言要具体、准确、简练，通俗易懂。
常用表达
1．It is reported that an activity was organized to get the students close to nature.
2．As is reported/According to the report，a terrible earthquake happened.
3．They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.
4．What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.
5．Apart from knowledge，we also learned to cooperate with each other and came to realize the importance of teamwork.
6．The activity benefited us a lot./The activity was of great benefit to us./The activity was beneficial to us.

东湖曾经是一处旅游胜地，但近年来受到严重的污染。当地政府采取了一些有效措施，使得污染情况有所减轻。假设你是李华，根据以下要点写一篇报道并呼吁社会关注此事。
1．曾经的情景(景美、水清、鱼儿嬉戏、游客多)；
2．后来的状况(工厂废水污染、游客乱扔垃圾)；
3．当地政府已经采取措施来拯救东湖，情况有所好转。
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

审题
写作要求是写关于旅游胜地东湖的污染及治理情况。写作时应注意下面几点：
1．确定文体：这是一篇报道，写作中应注意报道的常规格式。
2．主体时态：文章应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。
3．主体人称：由于是写关于旅游胜地东湖的污染及治理情况，所以人称应该以第三人称为主。
谋篇
第一段：介绍东湖以前的情况。
第二段：东湖的污染情况。
第三段：采取措施改善后的情况。

核心词汇
1．曾经是usedtobe...
2．欣赏……的美丽enjoyone’sbeauty
3．倒入pourinto
4．夜以继日dayandnight
5．扔进throwinto...
6．采取措施takemeasures
7．禁止某人做某事forbidsb.todosth.
8．被允许做某事beallowedtodosth.
连词成句
1．东湖过去是个美丽的地方，水很清澈，鱼儿在里面快乐地游着。
EastLakeusedtobeabeautifulplace and the water was clear and fishes swam in it happily.
2．游客们从全国各地来参观它，欣赏它的美。
Travelers came from all over the nation tovisititandenjoyeditsbeauty.
3．而且，垃圾经常被游客扔到湖里，这已经严重污染了这个湖。
Moreover，rubbish is often thrown into it by the visitors and ithaspollutedthelakebadly.
句式升级
1．用定语从句改写句1。
EastLakeusedtobeabeautifulplace，inwhichthewaterwasclearandfishesswamhappily.
2．用非谓语动词改写句2。
Travelerscamefromalloverthenationtovisitit，enjoyingitsbeauty.
3．用定语从句改写句3。
Moreover，rubbishisoftenthrownintoitbythevisitors，whichhaspollutedthelakebadly.

用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
East Lake used to be a beautiful place，in which the water was clear and fishes swam happily.Travelers came from all over the nation to visit it，enjoying its beauty.
Unfortunately，millions of tons of waste water from factories around has kept pouring into it day and night.Moreover，rubbish is often thrown into it by the visitors，which has polluted the lake badly.
The local government has realized the dangerous situation and taken some effective measures.Some factories are forbidden to pour waste water into it and the visitors are not allowed to throw rubbish into it.The lake is becoming more and more beautiful.

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