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Unit1Teenage Life
Period 4 Reading For Writing导学案
姓名： _________ 班级： ____________
1. To write an advice letter properly using some newly acquired writing skills in this period.
2. To master some words related to writing a proper suggestion letter..
1. To have a good understanding of how to write an impressive suggestion letter.
2.To write a convincing suggestion letter using some related writing skills.
Step 1: Lead in
What is the purpose of an advice letter? What kind of aspects should be included in such kind of letter?
Step 2: Read to discover details concerning advice letters’ writing style.
- Read a letter offering some advice on page 18 and then solve the questions below.
- What is Worried Friend’s problem?
- Do you think Ms Luo’s advice is useful? Why or why not?
- What other kinds of advice would you give?
- What expressions does Ms Luo use to make suggestions? Write them down.
Step 3: Read to sum up
Read the passage on Page 18 again and figure out the organization of the letter
Write down the sentences from the passage that match the following points.
A.I know what the problem is.
B I understand how you feel.
C. This is my advice and reasons
D I think my advice will help.
Step 4: Use what you have learnt to write a letter of advice to one of the teenager below.
- Choose one of the teenagers and discuss his or her problems. List possible suggestions and reasons.
Eric 15, Chicago
Xu Ting 14 Hangzhou
Min Ho, 15, Seoul
Step 5: Use what you have learnt to draft a letter offering advice to any of those students above.
1. Complete the outline and use it to draft your writing.
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Dear______
You wrote that ___________________
I understand that______________
I think____________________
Because_____________.
I am sure_______________
Best Wishes, (close and sign the letter).
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Discuss with your partners and figure out the following aspects:
建议信的模板
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建议信常见句式
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【答案】
Step 1: Lead in
What is the purpose of an advice letter? What kind of aspects should be including in such kind of letter?
建议信的目的是针对有关问题进行分析，并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和合理的建议。
建议信的基本框架：
1.开头( beginning)——开门见山,向对方陈述自己的观点(state your idea)。
2.主体( body)——对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由,接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence)。
3.结尾(ending)——呼应开头，重申观点(restate your opinion)。
Step 2: Read to discover details concerning advice letters’ writing style.
1.Read a letter offering some advice on page 18 and then solve the questions below.
- What is Worried Friend’s problem?
Her/His best friend spends too much time playing computer games online.
- Do you think Ms Luo’s advice is useful? Why or why not?
Yes. Susan advises Worried Friend to encourage Chen Lei to try new hobbies and discuss the problem together; I think Chen Lei will follow the advice, because they are best friends.
- What other kinds of advice would you give?
I advise Chen Lei to take some outdoor activities such as playing balls or reading interesting books or even listening to good music. We can go walking together. If he is bored, he can turn to me for help, thus we can have fun together.
2.What expressions does Ms Luo use to make suggestions? Write them down.
I understand quite well….
I recommend that you ….
I think you should …
Why not do …
I am sure he will…
Step 3: Read to sum up
Read the passage on Page 18 again and figure out the organization of the letter
Write down the sentences from the passage that match the following points.
A.I know what the problem is.
Your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
B I understand how you feel.
I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible.
C. This is my advice and reasons
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behavior. Spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life.
D I think my advice will help.
I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.
Step 4: Use what you have learnt to write a letter of advice to one of the teenager below.
Xu Ting 14 Hangzhou
Step 5: Use what you have learnt to draft a letter offering advice to any of those students above.
1. Complete the outline and use it to draft your writing.
8 October 2019
Dear Xu Ting
You wrote that you always feel lonely after school because my parents work in another city. I understand how you feel quite well.
I think it is a good idea to make some good friends in you class and have fun with them after school. In this way, you will feel less lonely because you can talk to each other about the unhappy things to reduce your bad feelings and have fun together. It is a good idea not to be alone, trying to be with your best friends.
I am sure finally you will be cheerful and get used to your present life.
Best Wishes,
Yours sincerely
Susan
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建议信的基本模板（初级）：
Dear______
You wrote that ___________________I understand that______________
I think____________________Because_____________.I am sure_______________
Best Wishes, (close and sign the letter).
高阶模板：
Dear _____________,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to _____________(问题), and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.
In my opinion, it would be wise for you to ________________(建议的内容). I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you for further details.
Yours sincerely,
建议信的常见句式
- I’m sorry that you are having trouble / difficulty / problems in….（如learning English, making friends…）Here are some tips to help you.
- Knowing that +句子, I’d like to give some suggestions.
- I am glad to give you some advice on the problem you are faced with.
二、建议部分：（结构清晰，理由正当，语气得体--如平辈之间、上下级，）
如：Firstly, … Secondly, … Thirdly, … Last but not least,…
Besides,… What’s more, …In addition…
注意：避免机械使用
- Why not do ……? / Why don’t you do …
- What about doing …? How about doing…?
- I advise /suggest that you (should) do…
- I strongly advise you to do …
- I highly recommend that you (should) do …
- It is highly recommended that you (should) do …
- You might / may as well do … 不妨做某事
- If I were you…, I would do…
- I feel it necessary for you to do …
三、结尾句型：（简洁，呼应开头）
- I hope you will find these ideas useful.
- I hope my advice is of some help to you.
- I do hope my advice is helpful to you.
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