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Unit4 Information Technology 写作技巧点拨
个人简介
一般而言，个人简介是个人进行自我介绍、展示自己能力并表达自己意向的一种途径。个人简介主要用于求职申请、报考申请、留学申请、加入某俱乐部或参加某活动的申请等。写作时除应注意格式上的要求外，也应注意全面审题，不能遗漏要点。
在写个人简介时，应重点阐述自己所具备的知识经验、专业技能、爱好、自己曾取得的成绩及申请的原因等，目的是突出自己的优势，提高竞争力。字里行间要体现出自信，态度要诚恳， 语言要简洁。个人简介通常以第一人称来写， 时态以一般现在时为主。
1．首段——写作目的
2．中段——优势介绍
3．尾段——表达感谢
1．I've just graduated from...in which I majored in...
2．As an outgoing ... get along well with my classmates.
3．I'm good at.../I do well in...
4．I have a good knowledge/command of...
5．I have the ability to...
6．I once worked as a(n)...for...years.
7．I worked as a(n)...during the period of...
8．I've had the experience of...
9．For one thing, I can help... For another, I can improve my English, make more friends, and enrich my life.
10．I am confident that I'm suitable for.../I'm qualified to do.../I'm equal to sth.
11．I'm sure I will be able to do it well if I get the job.
12．I would greatly appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
13．I will be quite grateful if I am offered the opportunity.
14．I'm looking forward to your early reply/the interview.
15．I look forward to hearing from you.
16．I would appreciate the chance to talk to you very much.
17．Thank you for your consideration. I wish to get your reply soon.
满分作文特训
假定你是李华，暑期在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：
1．写信目的；
2．个人优势；
3．能做的事情。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
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第一步：审题构思很关键
第二步：核心词汇想周全
1．take a summer course 参加暑期课程
2．holdaChinesepaintingexhibition 举办中国画展览
3．do some voluntary work 做志愿工作
4．be good at 擅长
5．be familiar with 熟悉
6．strengthen world cultural exchanges 加强世界文化交流
7．spread Chinese culture 传播中国文化
第三步：由词扩句雏形现
1．我是一名中国学生，正在伦敦参加暑期课程。
I'm a Chinese student, and I in London now.
2．很高兴你们的美术馆将要举办中国画展览。
I'm glad to learn that your gallery ．
3．我想为展览做志愿工作，因此我写信申请成为一名志愿者。
I would like to for the exhibition. So I am writing this letter to ．
4．我擅长英语并且熟悉中国画。
I English and Chinese paintings.
5．我志愿帮助参观者，介绍中国画，传播中国文化，加强世界文化交流。
I would like to ,__introduce Chinese paintings, ．
6．我的目的是让中国走向世界，让世界了解中国。
I want to and let the world understand China.
第四步：句式升级造亮点
1．用定语从句改写第三步中的句1
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2．用名词aim改写第三步中的句6
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第五步：过渡衔接连成篇
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参考答案：
由词扩句雏形现
1．我是一名中国学生，正在伦敦参加暑期课程。
I'm a Chinese student, and I amtakingasummercourse in London now.
2．很高兴你们的美术馆将要举办中国画展览。
I'm glad to learn that your gallery willholdaChinesepaintingexhibition．
3．我想为展览做志愿工作，因此我写信申请成为一名志愿者。
I would like to dosomevoluntarywork for the exhibition. So I am writing this letter to applytobeavolunteer．
4．我擅长英语并且熟悉中国画。
I amgoodat English and familiarwith Chinese paintings.
5．我志愿帮助参观者，介绍中国画，传播中国文化，加强世界文化交流。
I would like to volunteertohelpvisitors, introduce Chinese paintings, spreadChinesecultureand strengthenworldculturalexchanges．
6．我的目的是让中国走向世界，让世界了解中国。
I want to letChinagototheworld and let the world understand China.
第四步：句式升级造亮点
1．用定语从句改写第三步中的句1
I'm__a__Chinese__student__who__is__taking__a__summer__course__in__London__now.
2．用名词aim改写第三步中的句6
My__aim__is__to__let__China__go__to__the__world__and__let__the__world__understand__China.
第五步：过渡衔接连成篇
One possible version：
Dear Sir/Madam，
My name is Li Hua. I'm a Chinese student who is taking a summer course in London now. I'm glad to learn that your gallery will hold a Chinese painting exhibition. I would like to do some voluntary work for the exhibition. So I am writing this letter to apply to be a volunteer.
I am good at English and familiar with Chinese paintings. I would like to volunteer to help visitors, introduce Chinese paintings, spread Chinese culture, and strengthen world cultural exchanges. My aim is to let China go to the world and let the world understand China.
I would appreciate it if you could agree to my request.
Yours，
Li Hua
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