Unit11 Conflict and Compromise 写作技巧点拨(解析版)

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Unit11 Conflict and Compromise写作技巧点拨
观点对比类文章
文体感知
观点对比类文章一般分三步来展开，具体如下：
开篇引入话题：文章的开头用简练的语言自然引入要讨论的话题；
中间分述观点：文章的主体部分对人们持有的不同观点进行客观的介绍。有时为了达到层次分明的效果可采用“总括句＋观点1＋观点2”的“总—分”模式；
结尾简述个人看法：在文章的结尾根据写作的实际需要可简要、恰当地发表个人的看法。
增分佳句
1．We had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood.
2．Opinions are mainly divided into two groups.
3．Different people, however, have different opinions on this matter.
4．Some people are for the opinion/idea.
5．Sixty percent of the students are for the opinion/idea that sb. should...
6．Sixty percent of the students think it is necessary/good/helpful to...
7．The reasons are as follows.
8．First of all, doing sth. will enable sb. to do sth.
9．Besides, it's＋adj. (helpful/important/necessary...) for sb. to do sth.
10．However, other people are against it.
11．However, other people have/hold different views.
12．They think/believe...
13．As for me/As far as I am concerned/In my opinion/From my point of view...
14．Every coin has two sides.
15．I firmly support the view that...
满分作文特训
写作要求
人们对于学生网上交友持不同观点。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。

赞成的理由	反对的理由	你的看法
1.广交朋友； 2．可自由表达思想； 3．有利于学习	1.浪费时间； 2．影响学习； 3．可能上当受骗	……

注意：1.文章必须包括表格中的全部内容；
2．词数100左右。
审题谋篇
第一步：审题构思很关键


第二步：补全句子雏形现
1．他们认为互联网帮助他们结交了很多朋友。
They think the Internet helps__them__make__many__friends．
2．学生可以更自由地表达自己的感受和看法，甚至在学习中获得帮助。
Students can more freely express__their__feelings__and__opinions and even get__help with their studies.
3．另外一些人认为学生不应该在网上交朋友。
Others think students should not make__friends__online．
4．他们说网上交友是在浪费时间。
They say making friends online is a__waste__of__time．
5．这些时间应该更有意义地用在学习上。
This time should be__spent more meaningfully on__study．
6．有些学生在网上可能被骗。
Some students may get__cheated__online．
7．就我个人来看，学生们应该把学习、健康和安全放在首位。
In my opinion, students should place__their__study,__health__and__safety__before__other__things．
8．至于友谊，我们很容易在同学和周围的其他人中找到。
As for friendship，we can__readily__find__it__among__our__classmates__and__other__people around us.
第三步：句式升级造亮点
1．用定语从句连接第二步中的句4和句5
They__say__making__friends__online__is__a__waste__of__time,__which__should__be__spent__more__meaningfully__on__study.
2．用含有主语从句的复合句升级第二步中的句7
It__is__my__opinion__that__students__should__place__their__study，health__and__safety__before__other__things.
第四步：过渡衔接连成篇
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One possible version：
Should students make friends online？Some people say yes. They think the Internet helps them make many friends. What's more，students can more freely express their feelings and opinions and even get help with their studies.
Others，however，think students should not make friends online. They say making friends online is a waste of time，which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students may get cheated online.
It is my opinion that students should place their study，health and safety before other things. As for friendship，we can readily find it among our classmates and other people around us.
实战演练
目前，许多学校对学生采取封闭管理，学生们对此看法不一。请根据下表所提供的信息，写一篇短文。

有的同学认为	有的同学认为	你的看法
1.学校限制他们的自由； 2．学生和社会接触少； 3．学生的兴趣和爱好不能得到充分的发展。因此……	1.学校是学习知识的地方； 2．学生应该安心地在学校里学习； 3．学生缺乏自觉性，离开了老师， 可能会……	……

注意：1.不要逐字翻译；
2．词数100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long.
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One possible version：
Nowadays__a__lot__of__schools__keep__their__students__in__school__all__day__long. Students have different opinions about it.
Some of the students think they enjoy less freedom and have little chance to get in touch with society. They are not able to fully develop their interests and hobbies. Therefore, they have less interest in their studies.
Others think school is the best place to get knowledge so they should put their heart into their lessons. Some students lack the ability to control themselves. Once out of school, they may do something that will influence their studies.
Personally, it is necessary to keep students at school. At the same time, schools should organize various activities so that students can enjoy their school life.